the secret to life: Live itamore infinito!
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Thursday, March 30, 2006

 
Life Made

I sit in a seat
never moving, seeing all, yet unseen,
I am the ghost of times foretold
I know al that will happen, but I cannot chane fate
my sister fate is the one that molds lives
she is the one who kneads the clays and shapes the vessels
the love she puts into each one is a mother's touch
each one of the humans are her own children
she heats all in her stomach which is our furnace
and as the clay darkens and becomes solid
the people learn the hardship and blessings through her tears
each one exists because of her determination for life
and as she looses them upon their own world, a place named earth
where the gardens of Gaia grow
I sit in the corner, watching her produce life
never movine, seeing all, yet unseen.


I hope you guys like this one. I wrote in class and I have decided to share. Lately life has been so hectic that I just dont really have tiem to sit and watch life around me, one of my favorite past times. It is so wondrous just to sit down and watch another family eating dinner and having a good time. It makes a contrast to what your own life is like and makes memories of other lives. I like to look at people and make stories of their lives and try and guess who they are and what they are meant to be. I just want to have a good spring break i guess, its just so filled with homework that it is nto even like I am havign a break, more like teachign myself for my tests when I get back. Whoot!!! Another point to try and burn down the school lol just playing, but yea, i hope you all like this poem, its a bit different, when i wrote it i didnt really think of what was happening next, it just sort of came out.
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Hey, nice poem. I like the beginning a lot. Might want to fix all the spelling errors though. (Just the spelling-nazi in me talking.)

Have a great day!


-Seto
Posted 3/30/2006 11:59 AM by Setograav_The_Ancient - reply

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I like your poem especially the last part. I kind of like watching people and speculating about their lives too. Living it isn't so bad either.

But that only happens when theres no school...
Posted 3/30/2006 9:28 PM by Spirit_of_the_Trees - reply

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Loverly poem.

Tomarrow tomarrow theres always tomarrow. AHHHHHHH we leave tomarrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CRAZYNESS!!!!!!!!

HA you are always making me laugh*

Posted 4/4/2006 10:29 PM by CamilleYoung - reply

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ooh...awesome.  i envy your writing skills.

congrats on duet and figures!  the best our duet ever got the 2 years we went (we never requalified, how sad is that...) was like 35th.  yay us. 

hey, do you remember before team warmup when everyone was crushed into 2 lanes in the diving well trying to lap swim?  our team was swimming right after your team, but i didn't notice until i saw the TBS on your caps when you guys were getting out and walking away.  so yeah...we kind of sort of met in real life!  it's a start!

Posted 4/13/2006 12:42 AM by HighlyObsessiveOne - reply

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HAHAH chester that picture is SOOOOOOOOO funny.

(Have you bought me that action figure yet? :)

Posted 5/27/2006 8:29 AM by CamilleYoung - reply

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Hey nice profile.. add me on msn dancydima@hotmail.com - im trying to meet some new friends in my area :) xoxox monica - ps i have a webcam so msn me and ill go on :)
Posted 7/26/2006 8:18 PM by webkinkz - reply


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